This looks great so far! I feel that there could be an emphasis on the so in the "you are so beautiful) but you could do this many different ways either through font or animating it.
I really like your font choice, along with the colors and audio, I think they go very well together. I would definitely experiment with effects on certain words to emphasis them more.
I think the sans serif type is too big and it distracts from the lovely script words. And add an emotional audio track under the words to make it more sad.
I agree with a lot of the criticism that's already been offered. I think your text could benefit from more variation in weight, size, and maybe a font change to something that pairs with your script a bit better. Lots of options! But I think that's part of the fun! You could even mess around with the layout of your text to focus on the emphasized words or create some visually appealing shapes so your text doesn't take up the same amount of space with each line
Hi Sarah Nice start so far. Some good comments above. I would go ahead and get everything in sync so you can start styling. When changing gears to design emphasis look at the timeline as way to create unity by committing to a grid and layout. Then exploiting that direction on the timeline in other text. Many times you can just tweak on design and then milk it. Melody Chorus Melody.
I like the audio choice. I think it looks good already!
ReplyDeletenice audio choice and the colors match well! maybe try varying type in size?
ReplyDeleteThis looks great so far! I feel that there could be an emphasis on the so in the "you are so beautiful) but you could do this many different ways either through font or animating it.
ReplyDeleteI really like your font choice, along with the colors and audio, I think they go very well together. I would definitely experiment with effects on certain words to emphasis them more.
ReplyDeleteI think the sans serif type is too big and it distracts from the lovely script words. And add an emotional audio track under the words to make it more sad.
ReplyDeleteI love the audio an it speaks to the font and color choices. I think add a background track
ReplyDeleteI agree with a lot of the criticism that's already been offered. I think your text could benefit from more variation in weight, size, and maybe a font change to something that pairs with your script a bit better. Lots of options! But I think that's part of the fun!
ReplyDeleteYou could even mess around with the layout of your text to focus on the emphasized words or create some visually appealing shapes so your text doesn't take up the same amount of space with each line
Good font choices, I would add more variety with scale, but this is a good start.
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah
ReplyDeleteNice start so far. Some good comments above. I would go ahead and get everything in sync so you can start styling. When changing gears to design emphasis look at the timeline as way to create unity by committing to a grid and layout. Then exploiting that direction on the timeline in other text. Many times you can just tweak on design and then milk it. Melody Chorus Melody.